Band Together
Name the product in a way the reader (i.e. your target customers) will understand. Band Together is a social networking service for musicians and bands.
Describe who the market for the product is and what benefit they get. One sentence only underneath the title. For local and touring bands and musicians who want to connect with other artists to set up shows/add members.
Give a summary of the product and the benefit. Assume the reader will not read anything else so make this paragraph good. Band Together makes it easier to connect with other local musicians for gigs. Going on tour? Search Band Together's listings in a specific city, and connect with a band in that city for a show! Need a new drummer? Post a listing looking for a new drummer! With Band Together, networking in local music has never been easier.
Describe the problem your product solves. One of the biggest struggles in local music today is networking. Having to search for bands to play with in cities you might be touring in can be a pain.
Describe how your product elegantly solves the problem. Band Together makes it easier to find bands/artists in specific cities who want to play shows.
A quote from a spokesperson in your company.
Describe how easy it is to get started. Sign up for an account, fill out your profile details, and make a listing! Or, you can browse through listings other artists have made and connect with them!
Provide a quote from a hypothetical customer that describes how they experienced the benefit. "Thanks to Band Together, my music network has expanded across the United States! Now, I can find a band to play with anywhere!"
Wrap it up and give pointers where the reader should go next. If you are a local musician struggling to network, give Band Together a try! Sign up and start posting today!